Recommendations from Supervisor - (LIT REVIEW)
Marina,
It is a good start, but you need to include your references.
If you can compare and contrast the models a little more in depth, highlighting further their merits and limitations and how it relates to bespoke applications it will be useful. All in all a good start.
Regards,
KBS
Another person's Comments
Need to read in house applications - what expertes/authors say on it and
Tie it back to the models in my literature review
Grammar needs alot of work
Beware of audience, dont ramble, explain, dont repeat
Stay on topic and remember slant/angle of my paper to always connect back to it
the in house papers will hopefully help with the direction of the questions to pose to the companies
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