4th Aug 2012 () - Critique my paper

Notes from reading my Paper:

Introduction would have to change. Can be done at the end of the paper.
Objectives remains the same
Do I want to create a new model for UA as part of my objectives?

Lit review - do more for lit review look for back up evidence on the UA findings - look for linkage

Lit review and findings of UA - did not link the with lit review with the findings.disjoint

Survey was linked to Lit review - good

Recommendations

The recommendations did not lead up from what was said before. More flow needed.
Out of nowhere the recommendations showed up with not enough into into the recommendations.

Development solution - did not see how the lit review catered or supported this angle or part  of the solution


The final recommendations is jus combining UA, change mangement solution with dev technique - is this anything new?
or can be augmented  into something bigger and new/original

Change model - I am jsut reusing someone else's model, but what can i add to make it better model, more accurate

Link long term strategies what was referenced in the lit review for flow

User acceptance metric


Critical Eval on user acceptance metric

Supervisor Meeting - (2 hours) Thur 5 July 2012

Thur 5^th July 2012

Notes from Supervisor Meeting:

Compare contrast companies

Dig deeper- more analysis needed

Get more information from the SBCS and Teleios

Revisit literature review – review same articles, get more articles,

More Breadth, More Depth

Link lit review to direction and conclusion of the paper

Don’t leave things hanging, connect everything

This project will be a complete rewrite of this paper. Same topic but fresh rewrite of the paper

If 3 articles say the same thing – then say 3 people agreed to this

Next steps:

Reread the paper be critical about it, make notes of things to fix, redo

Revisit the lit review, read articles tie in stuff.

Identify next steps for directions

Make reference list in alphabetical order

See what information I need from Teleios and SBCS again

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